Day Of Crit (missed)

On the day of my crit, I read my email late and so I found out the location of the lecture had changed. I was unable to locate Somerset House, so I decided to go back to Ravensborne to revisit my film and work on my blog.

CRIT

Feedback

·         Unfinished

·         Confused on Narrative

·         Tension needs to be added

·         Style and cinematography well done

Plan

·         Finish

·         Develop narrative and story line

·         create a simple story board / shooting script to help you create a distinct narrative

Comments from classmate

"I like the lighting and shots. Definitely needs audio.  So far so good, I can’t wait for it to be finished.