Editing : Caught in the Act

We started the day with Jamie editing the footage that was done last week. when we finished the first draft we showed Seb the footage of the film and he saw errors and we decided to re-shoot and add more footage to the film.
Sebs Comments :

Shot of Jeff scrolling on laptop

Shot of Jeff scrolling on laptop

Slow cuts (cut faster )

Have Jeff in frame coming into the building.

Keep typing

Keep sound cut straight to reaction of Alex of the hand closing the laptop

Few frames more on Jeff and Alex looking at each other.

Give Jeff more frames to move to Alex

Take out Alex eating cookie

The moment he eats the cookie the voice over starts 

After adding more footage we showed Seb again and he explained how theirs no visual of how there is no consequence to what the two brothers are doing to each other.

Extra things we were to by Seb to do:

Jeff needs to do a voice over
Better resolution
What are the consequences of showing