Thursday 3 March 2016

Child Drug War

I finally finished the drug war short; although I am disappointed with the outcome and will in future change and improve on it.
My voice actor failed to help me complete the voice over so I had to improvise with my own voice. quite a few of the shots were kind of badly edited I will improve on those areas.
Also I wish to re-shoot the ending , it was very rushed and not thought out well enough.










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Unclear premises
Weird ending
Some shots are repetitive
Very long shots should be shortened
make it more clear the man chasing the drug dealer is a cop/enforcer of the law

Decent camera work
Decent lighting

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